I am at page 105 out of 307 on my second round of revisions. I have found a few scenes that needed to be reworked slightly. There is a part coming up that feels fairly weak to me and I am going to try to strengthen it when I get there. So far I think I am on track to finish by the end of June which will let me send off for Developmental edits in July.
A lot of my energy has been going into finding my team for this book. Looking up and speaking with editors and artists for the polishing and cover design.
After working on this story for so long, it is still surreal to be making actual steps toward publishing. This isn’t really what I was expecting to use my business degree for. Haha!
A little snippet of the guys during training:
“This is Hadrian, a fire sorcerer, and this is Conleth,” Fintan ruffled the hair of the nearest sorcerer who scowled at him for the gesture as he shoved away. “Our little water sorc.”
“I’d like to see you handle water the way I do.” Conleth shot back as he ran his hands through his hair.
“Settle down, Connie,” he said and moved on before the sorcerer could retort. “Halvar, there’s a bench there. Cyrus might have had a touch of a point.” He scrunched his face. “You look like a ghost.”
“I’m fine.” He huffed but went and settled in on the bench.
Thanks for reading!
-Michelle R Bowen
